Could you make one lava Giratina for me? Its meh second request

June 03, 2015 10:36:43pmBlueLink9001 Wrote:  I like the soul type the best, Prehaps you could try a Soul Yveltal?

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June 04, 2015 6:09:35amEliteBOY Wrote:  Could you make one lava Giratina for me? Its meh second request

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No problem!

Wow! It looks really awesome! Thanks a lot for the Lava Giratina TamerzZ

Wow, The Soul Yveltal looks amazing o_o Thanks for takin' my suggestion XD

Thanks guys! Waiting for more requests lol

If you havent got any requests, will you do 3 types of Victini for me? If its ok!

Ok i'm gonna be harsh here, but only so you know what to improve, it's better than me just saying 'It's great, gj' and not giving you any feedback to work towards.Also, this is just my opinion so don't be angry and say that any of the stuff I write isn't true, this is just what I personally think, other people may think differently than me.

Now, lets start with the Soul types:
- You have 2 designs for the soul type, as the fennekin and flareon are different than the giratina and mew. Try and stick with one common 'template' or design, rather than just using whichever one you feel like.
- The effect on the fennekin and flareon is a bit too overwhelming, and it kinda blocks the actual sprite, it's a nice effect, but tone it down a bit so the pokemon's normal design and colour/shading is still visible.
- The giratina design on the right is way too bright imo, giratina is supposed to be quite dark and ominous, so using a darker shade would work better.
- There's is to much contrast on the mew for my liking, contrast is great but too much can ruin it, e.g. the tail is hard to look at, so maybe tone that down a bit too.

The DNA types:
- I had to look very close at the giratina to just see it's details, the dna effect is just too much when it's used on the whole sprite, maybe try and just recolour the face and top part of its body, and leave the effect on the wings and bottom of the sprite. This is why I actually think the dragonite sprite is the best DNA sprite shown, along with the zapdos.
- All of the DNA sprites shown so far just look like a picture in a layer that was set on overlay to me, sp creating some kind of outer effect, like on the soul sprites, would give it something more imo.

The Lava types:
- Again, the lava lightning effect, or whatever it's called, is used way too much on all the sprites and is used in places where it's really not needed, especially on the ho-oh and rayquaza, and kinda just ruins it and makes it very hard to see and be able to appreciate the details and the recoloring on the sprites, so I would use it sparingly.
- The recoloring on the ho-oh is quite bad, it looks like a burnt chicken, and the white body just looks really out of place when the whole sprite is a dark grey/black colour, try using a lighter shade on that ho-oh and change the white part to a light gray.
- Giving the sprites an outer effect, just like I recommended with the DNA type, would give it that something extra that it needs imo, maybe a sort of flame effect to match the lava theme.

That was one best suggestion ever! I dont mind being harshed. Thank you for the defects you have in my sprites. I'll try to improve then and will upload more. Hope to get improvements in them.thanks again!

cool brushes used in soul